Wednesday 21 September 2016

Trip- 5 minute film idea.



Film idea

17 year old Ellie is planning a shopping trip with her friends. There will be a shot of a group chat where the girls are arranging things. Elliptical editing will be used to show her getting ready throughout the morning. However, as she’s getting ready she begins to get sharp pains in her head that force her to stop what she is doing. During the head pains, there will be cutaways of a car speeding on a road and then car crash noises (as if she is seeing an accident that has not yet happened). She pushes these images away and leaves her house, meeting up with a friend as they make their way to the bus stop. She sees a car in the distance which causes another sharp head pain and she sees herself getting hit by the car. The overwhelming image of her getting hit and the pain in her head causes her to stagger and fall into the road where she is actually hit by the car. A close up shot of her face fades to black as the noise of a beeping car horn fades into the beep of a hospital machine (the fade to black transitions into the next scene).

As she is waking up she sees her parents and her little brother stood around her bed, they are all blurry as the camera angle will give the impression that we are seeing things through her eyes. After her parents realise she has woken up her mum leans in to hug her. This is when Ellie gets another pain in her head and sees her mum falling down the stairs (a cut away shot would be used).


Suddenly she realises what’s wrong with her – she can see things happening before they do. She tries to tell her mum but she’s drowsy and can’t speak properly so her mum shushes her and strokes her hair until she falls to sleep. The camera pans away from her face to the hospital door in order to signal a scene change.


When she wakes up it is night time. To signal this to the audience a shot of a digital clock reading 1:00am will be the first scene of the shot. The hospital room she’s in will be dimly lit. When she wakes up she sees her dad (who has been crying) and her little brother who is stood in silence with a pale face.  Her dad begins speaking “it’s your mum…she fell…and…”, Ellie already knows as she saw the image in her head so replies “she’s dead.” At first her dad will be confused and unwilling to understand. That is until Ellie has a final pain in her head and sees her little brother getting kidnapped. She desperately tries to warn her father who is sceptical.


The man who could possibly kidnap her little brother walks past her hospital room and glances through the window. He is dressed shadily in dark clothes and when he notices Ellie and her little brother his eyes stare unblinkingly as he passes the window. In that moment her dad realises that Ellie is telling the truth. The scene ends with a close of his shocked face and Ellie’s voice in the background saying “I told you dad.”


The final scene is a long shot of Ellie and her little brother sat at the kitchen table. Their dad brings the dinner he cooked to the table but it’s burnt and inedible. A close up shot will be used to show the audience the state of the food and then it will cut back to a long shot of the family staring down at their dinner plates. The camera will pan right to reveal and empty chair where their mother should be. Then the scene will fade to black.

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