Wednesday 21 September 2016

Karma- 5 minute film idea.

Scene 1


INT, Coffee shop, DAY.

A montage of them inside.

Voiceover:

We had just walked out of the local coffee shop; this is where we would occasionally go to seem normal. We had been that often that the staff knew our usual, a burning hot gingerbread latte and hot chocolate with a big, juicy slather of chocolate cake to share, of course cut with the biggest knife they had. Being known however, is what we intended. With our kind of life, seeming like an ordinary couple was compulsory.

Scene 2

INT, Home, EVENING.

Two main characters stood looking at a wall with pictures of people on, some with crosses on and some without. Also there is a lot of writing and ways to torture people. They are both dressed as themselves.

Girl:

(Throws dart and camera follows, it lands on a picture of a girl)

Girl:

Bulls eye! I never really liked her anyway.

Boy:

May I?

Girl:  

(Grabs blindfold and blindfolds the boy. Allows him to throw the next dart)

You may.

Boy:

 ( Throws the dart, a shot from behind him is shown with the dart landing on something that says ink.)

Girl:

Oh, that's shit!

Boy:

(Tries taking off blindfold really fast.)

We can make something out of that can't we?

Girl:

How do you suppose you torture someone with ink.

Boy:

You'll find something, don't worry yourself.

Boy:

(Kisses girl on the head.)

Scene 3

INT, Bedroom, NIGHT.

Both the girl and boy are laid in bed together ready to go to sleep.

Girl:

(Looks up to boy slightly) So what's the plan?

Boy:

Plan?

Girl:

To get her tomorrow.

Boy:

Just go with it, you will find out, you always do.

(Boy rolls over and starts to fall asleep on girl while she is laid flat on her back staring straight into camera.)

Voiceover:

When me and NAME met, we studied law at college, this subject taught us a lot about the world and, of course the law. Which at the time, we didn't realise would benefit us so much now. We were able to do things that nobody could ever do so swift, we had a good repetition and everyone saw us as good people. We are good people, we just give the bad people Karma if it doesn't get them before us.

Scene 4

INT, Bedroom, EVENING.

Girl:

(Turns to clock and sees the time is almost 3pm.)

Shit! Shit, shit shit!

Boy:

(Waking up fast)

what's wrong?

(Girl ignores him and a montage begins to represent her getting ready. Includes shower, toilet, brushing teeth, drying hair, applying makeup, getting dressed and applying her wig.)

Scene 5

EXT: Park, NIGHT.

(They begin following the girl they wish to torture and this is shown through a couple of shots.)

(They are then seen putting a bag over her head- to be continued in next scene.)

Scene 6

INT: Home, MIDNIGHT.

(As soon as the clock goes to 00:00 the couple begin to 'torture' the girl, they start to write on her skin in tattoo ink, writing karma multiple times)

End credits

The end credits are a series of tattoos explaining who did what in the film, it is a creative way to link the film with the end credits.



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